I didn't like the random, weird body policing - seriously, the main villain has done awful things to two-fifths of the city and the narrative stops to make the point that she has a sedentary physique and doesn't moisturise her knees often enough? - and I thought the pacing was off. I did like the long training montage section in the middle, which I would have LOVED when I was fourteen, and probably found intensely helpful in surviving to grow up, and I'll give the author a shot if she starts another series.
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Date: 2014-03-20 06:18 pm (UTC)